Empathizing with the feelings in this so much an addiction to blood corrupts me also this poem is of such a degree of beauty and depth that it brings me too tears I commend you on your writing and your courage
REALLY well done, i can see the emotional pain and depth that is written here. it takes courage to put this kind of stuff online. an awesome piece of writing (:
b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!! i absolutely enjoyed reading this one, i really felt the depth of its emotional message and whether it was intentional or not, i could really picture it in my head, the imagery of it, well done, a brilliant piece