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  • Cronos.'

    Cronos.' (100)

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    Not bad at all. No grammatical errors and the verses rhyme nicely! The second and fourth stanzas are well choreographed.
    August 13th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • nikolai travolskie

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    very well written
    August 12th, 2011 at 04:09am
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