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Oh wow<3

I feel like you're writing for meXD
"You had the nerve." That line makes me think about Pink you know cause her songs are so edgy. I wish I could listen to this (Inhuman is still my favorite.) I like the last four lines of the song:) this song seems like it would sound like flyleaf or something? Whatever the lyrics are great=]

Oh man, it's been a long time since I read something this good. Most songs and poetry now are just..ugh, but this? This fantastic.
Your rhythm is precise in a way that most people can't match. This actually felt like a song, which is so rare on here.
I have great respect for people who can write excellent songs and poems. You are one of those people.

v. I meant to say "I love it" >_<

OMG! Hubby! This is a really good song! All the emotions come through perfectly and to me, it's telling a really sad story. :'( I love and guess what? This is gonna be featured in the next poem support. :)

I love this, like JJ said this would make a wonderful song and I love how everything doesn't necessarily rhyme. I love poems that don't rhyme. I love the concept to, something like this is overdone on mibba but you presented it in such a different way.

This would make a wonderfrul song.

The flow and structure is perfect for a song.

The chorus is catchy, it's already half way in my head.

Good job!

I can really see this as a song. You should find someone to write music for this if you already haven't or if you don't do it yourself. What genre would this be, I can see it as a Metal like Three days grace type thing. The emotion is strong and the rhymes aren't stupid forced rhymes keep writing.

As Brianna said, I wish it was an actual song so I could listen to it on repeat all the time. It's really beautiful and it feels real. You know people can relate to it, which makes the theme behind the song strong.
You're a really good writer, props to you!

It's very strong and deep. Like it's not a senseless pop song you can tell it has meaning. So I just love this!

AH! I love this :D I wish it was a real song that I could buy and put onto my IPod. Amazing, you should do this for a living :D