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  • Yella

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    Oh wow<3

    I feel like you're writing for meXD
    "You had the nerve." That line makes me think about Pink you know cause her songs are so edgy. I wish I could listen to this (Inhuman is still my favorite.) I like the last four lines of the song:) this song seems like it would sound like flyleaf or something? Whatever the lyrics are great=]
    November 8th, 2011 at 03:26pm
  • not here anymore

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    Oh man, it's been a long time since I read something this good. Most songs and poetry now are just..ugh, but this? This fantastic.
    Your rhythm is precise in a way that most people can't match. This actually felt like a song, which is so rare on here.
    I have great respect for people who can write excellent songs and poems. You are one of those people.
    October 12th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • wish on a firefly

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    v. I meant to say "I love it" >_<
    September 6th, 2011 at 07:14pm
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    OMG! Hubby! This is a really good song! All the emotions come through perfectly and to me, it's telling a really sad story. :'( I love and guess what? This is gonna be featured in the next poem support. :)
    September 6th, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • vampire_lover666

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    I love this, like JJ said this would make a wonderful song and I love how everything doesn't necessarily rhyme. I love poems that don't rhyme. I love the concept to, something like this is overdone on mibba but you presented it in such a different way.
    September 2nd, 2011 at 12:47am
  • Eimie

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    This would make a wonderfrul song.

    The flow and structure is perfect for a song.

    The chorus is catchy, it's already half way in my head.

    Good job!
    August 24th, 2011 at 04:56pm
  • bad habits

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    I can really see this as a song. You should find someone to write music for this if you already haven't or if you don't do it yourself. What genre would this be, I can see it as a Metal like Three days grace type thing. The emotion is strong and the rhymes aren't stupid forced rhymes keep writing.
    August 23rd, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • seized ships

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    As Brianna said, I wish it was an actual song so I could listen to it on repeat all the time. It's really beautiful and it feels real. You know people can relate to it, which makes the theme behind the song strong.
    You're a really good writer, props to you!
    August 22nd, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • divine;

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    It's very strong and deep. Like it's not a senseless pop song you can tell it has meaning. So I just love this!
    August 21st, 2011 at 07:49pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    AH! I love this :D I wish it was a real song that I could buy and put onto my IPod. Amazing, you should do this for a living :D
    August 20th, 2011 at 12:38am
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