Excitement Flashes - Comments

  • FrozenFire

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    i like the way you tied in the title at the end, i like doing that with my poems! everyone is right, this is very emotional. well written.
    September 27th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • poetryluver

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    Awesome!!!!!!!
    September 6th, 2011 at 01:02am
  • Under the Stars

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    This is so emotional and moving, I could feel everything that was happening as it went along. Great description and awesome poem.
    September 5th, 2011 at 09:40pm
  • DylaCoughli

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    Very emotional, I enjoy it alot. I can tell that this event is a black mark on the windowsill that is your mind. Pardon my metaphor, sometimes I try to sound smart :/
    September 5th, 2011 at 07:16pm