I still don't know what your poetry is about, but this was awesome.
This imagery in this was gruesome is a great way. I loved the figurative language you used, and again, your rhythm was superb.
This was heart wrenching for some reason. It made me really sad.
This imagery in this was gruesome is a great way. I loved the figurative language you used, and again, your rhythm was superb.
This was heart wrenching for some reason. It made me really sad.