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  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    That was amazing :)
    It's a little confusing at the beginning but it's poetry :)

    I feel like you could do a lot more with structure, but other than that, it was absolutely gorgeous. :) yay! :D
    November 4th, 2011 at 02:03am
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