What am I Fighting for if it Ain't You? - Comments

Good job! Can you comment, subscribe, and give me advice on how to write better on my poems and stories? I would really apprecciate it!

I like the whole idea of this poem. The whole fight theme and the love and the self discovery. It's beautiful and breathtaking. My only problem is that it doesn't have a clean flow. Try reading it out loud to clean it up.

I can feel the emotion in this poem. I like how you just put it out there like that. Simple to the point and lovely.

this is amazing :) i love this poemm <3