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What am I Fighting for if it Ain't You? - Comments

  • BReal

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    Good job! Can you comment, subscribe, and give me advice on how to write better on my poems and stories? I would really apprecciate it!
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • not here anymore

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    I like the whole idea of this poem. The whole fight theme and the love and the self discovery. It's beautiful and breathtaking. My only problem is that it doesn't have a clean flow. Try reading it out loud to clean it up.
    November 1st, 2011 at 04:17am
  • LostinTime

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    I can feel the emotion in this poem. I like how you just put it out there like that. Simple to the point and lovely.
    November 1st, 2011 at 02:59am
  • XxDanceInTheRainxX

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    this is amazing :) i love this poemm <3
    October 30th, 2011 at 03:31pm
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