Hellbent Rollercoaster - Comments

  • VeiledInsanity

    VeiledInsanity (150)

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    This is exactly what I was looking for in this prompt. I can`t describe this other than dark and I really have to applaud you as this turned out to be a difficult prompt. Absolutely breath taking imagery and use of the prompt. I positively adore this. I love how you use visual effects to your poetry as well, especially in a dark poem like this, it really adds to the effect. I LOVE how you ended this and I can almost fill the last line with the word `me.` I honestly can`t stop babbling about this, awesome job. I just wish it wasn't late so that i could give you a perfect score.
    Final Score:
    Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
    Grammar and spelling 5/5
    Originality 5/5
    Flow 5/5
    Ability to capture my attention 5/5
    Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
    Late -2
    Total: 28/30
    November 1st, 2011 at 01:51am