This is exactly what I was looking for in this prompt. I can`t describe this other than dark and I really have to applaud you as this turned out to be a difficult prompt. Absolutely breath taking imagery and use of the prompt. I positively adore this. I love how you use visual effects to your poetry as well, especially in a dark poem like this, it really adds to the effect. I LOVE how you ended this and I can almost fill the last line with the word `me.` I honestly can`t stop babbling about this, awesome job. I just wish it wasn't late so that i could give you a perfect score.
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Late -2
Total: 28/30
Final Score:
Correctly incorporating the prompt 5/5
Grammar and spelling 5/5
Originality 5/5
Flow 5/5
Ability to capture my attention 5/5
Vocabulary/Diction 5/5
Late -2
Total: 28/30