I'm at a Crossroads (Dead End) - Comments

  • BReal

    BReal (100)

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    Good job! Can you comment, subscribe, and give me advice on how to write better on my poems and stories? I would really apprecciate it!
    November 14th, 2011 at 09:42pm
  • Nukely R

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    It's different, I have to say. I don't think i've ever read a poem in which you actively draw attention to the title, but ok. First time for everything I suppose. I like how, despite it being free verse, it flows nicely. :)
    November 12th, 2011 at 11:27pm