This is amazing, Brittany. <3 I loved it. Don't ask me why I'm stalking your stuffs all of a sudden. I just felt like doing so. but the feelings in this poem is beautiful. :)
I really like this poem. I just love the feelings and thoughts it evokes. It reminds me of breaking out of a cage and flying away or something and just breathing the free air. I also really like the structure of it as well. It's free verse but not like all over the place; it has nice flow, I think.