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  • LivingMyNightmare

    LivingMyNightmare (100)

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    iReally Like This Poem But iThink iCan Help You Make It Better (Even Though Its Already Great) You Can Make It Flow Better Like This Instead Of "These bullies ask me who am I. I don’t know anymore because I don’t have the courage To stand up to them"
    You Could Say:
    "These Bullies Ask Me Who Am I
    But iCant Even Look Them In The Eye
    iDont Who iAm Anymore
    iJust Want To Stand To Them Like iDid Before"

    Hope This Helped(:
    December 15th, 2011 at 02:03am
  • LivingMyNightmare

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    Good Poem iLike The Meaning Of It.!
    December 15th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • Lil'Biskette

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    Plz Comment... I need critisism :)
    December 15th, 2011 at 01:18am