@ Emmelz Liebe thanks so much for the positive comment - I've been a little worried that the poems I have posted would be seen as stereotypical 'emo kid' writing, even though i only wrote how i felt, so it's brilliant to know that the emotions resonate with other people as well =)
This poem was very deep, and through it I could feel the hurt and, perhaps, loneliness of the person. It was very emotional and I thought this was a great read. Great, great job on this! :)
thanks so much for the positive comment - I've been a little worried that the poems I have posted would be seen as stereotypical 'emo kid' writing, even though i only wrote how i felt, so it's brilliant to know that the emotions resonate with other people as well =)