Nevermore - Comments

Amazing:)

Beautiful. Your title attracted my attention first; reminiscent of one by my favorite poet (The Raven, by Edgar Allen Poe). Reading through the lines and stanzas I could see my comparison wasn't far off. This play, whether intentional or not was great, it really added to the feeling of the poem. As I read, the emotion and strength of the words just wached over me, seeping through my skin and absorbing into my mind to make me feel just what you were. This poem is just amazing! There were just a couple grammer/spelling mistakes (which I feel abliged to point out): moon's-stanza 2 and I'll-stanza 7 (forgot apostophes), and lay hoping-stanza 6 (forgot space).

Amazingly beautiful (: