Sometimes When It Storms - Comments

This is seriously gorgeous. Your use of figurative language is very well controlled and creates a fantastic personal environment for the poem. But all in all, the last line was what really struck me. The idea that this big, booming, omnipresent voice of God is truly meaningless. There's just something about that which is very attractive to be. Fantastic writing, really.

I absolutely loved the first five lines of this poem. They just blew me away.

that word 'meaningless' gave the poem all the meaning

when i read this i can see what youre saying in my head. i love what i see, and i can feel the wind and hear the thunder and smell the rain. nothing but love for this.

I really like this poem, I love the description of God's voice, and "I disappear in the wind and I come back in the lightning."