Shrinking to nothing is bad but shrinking to something small in order to explore what you can only phantasize about is a good thing. It shows how much you want to see things in a different light, and that's something all of us should be doing.
The detail of every thought described in a different stanza makes it easier to read while setting different scenes on the reader's mind.
Behind every single detail you can feel how much the narrator wishes for it, to the point of trying as much as she can to convey her feelings thanks to the details she uses in her speach.
The detail of every thought described in a different stanza makes it easier to read while setting different scenes on the reader's mind.
Behind every single detail you can feel how much the narrator wishes for it, to the point of trying as much as she can to convey her feelings thanks to the details she uses in her speach.
-Maria. :)