Great uses of imagery. I love how the images spook across the poem giving me a wide sense of understanding. Enough emotion to connect to it. Lovely poem. :D
I actually was going to mention you look at my poem and critique, but I can see you've beaten me to it, lol xD But thank you very much for the feedback, it's honestly not my best work. But a few of my friends kept telling I should post it. But it really means a lot to me, nonetheless :)
Phenomenal(:I love the wide sense of vocabulary going on here.I love the pattern,the spacing between stanzas,and the whole poem entirely.It is very well written,and very well thought out.2 Thumbs Up(: