Burn - Comments

It's short but excellent, I like it :) keep up the good writing!

this is a nice short poem, beautiful

Loved it. You had a solid idea, that anyone can relate to. To me that is the most important thing in a poem.

I'm speechlesss...it was good and it just hypnotized me from the start...wow...wow

Oh, wow. The layout and the poem are both amazing. I was in love after the first paragraph, and I was hooked until the end.

The first two stanzas were the best flow-wise, I think. The rhymes and rhythms were smoother than that of the last two. The last two had all of the meaning, though, and it was a good meaning. The last one made me think of vampires, though. My mind is stuck in the supernatural genre. ><

Another excellent poem! Thank you so much for sharing. :)