Unspoken - Comments

First, I love the layout. It fits the theme of the poem so well, yet is simple.
This poem is really great, and it captures emotion even in the shortness of the poem. It's clear that there is that emotion and depth to it and I enjoyed it a lot!

I love this a lot its got a lot of depth to it and I get a vib that I cant really exsplain yet some how I feel I can relate to this so much ...

I like the fact you don't really have a rhym yet at the same time you do, i don't think all poems need to rhym I love the emotion you've put in to this

Much <3 Kat

Okay, I'm not really a rhyming person, but I like this. I think what I like about it so much is the raw feeling. You wrote to capture how you felt, and that's exactly what you did, uncomfortable rhymes aside. I like it!

Brilliant! I love this poem.
Poems are poems. When it comes to literature, there are two kinds. One with rules and one without. That is why writers have their own rules. Poets don't follow any and that's what makes them great.

nice poem ^^
and you shouldn't worry what others think. all poems are different, and some don't rhyme at all. this is your poem, completely original and you've done a good job on it. i like it =]