i love it. the words convey so much power and the way the poem progresses is really good.
July 8th, 2012 at 04:51pm
I really enjoy the rhyme scheme, even if it does get a little messy at times (no pun intended).
Your words are vivid and I rather like this poem. You wrote very to the point, without many adverbs or fillers, but I think it was necessary for this kind of poem.
All in all I quite enjoyed your words :)