This is really sweet.:) I really like this poem. You have it flow very well, yet at the same time you add pauses to stretch out the meaning of each word. I saw no mistakes and that added to the professional, and emotional feel of words. My favorite part was, So I will keep you bound in these words, and every time I turn the page, I promise it’ll feel like our fingers are intertwined, It popped out to me for soem reason and I really enjoyed how you wrote this poem. Great job.:)
So I will keep you bound in these words,
and every time I turn the page,
I promise it’ll feel like our fingers are intertwined,
It popped out to me for soem reason and I really enjoyed how you wrote this poem. Great job.:)