Everyday This Is I - Comments

@ Living Lies.
Thank you very much, very glad that you liked it and you're are definitely right, someone out there will like it. A lot of people don't realize the other kind of worlds that exist out there and this was just a small fragment of such a world. And thank you again for saying I'm an "amazing writer" lol...I never thought of myself as such but it is a confidence booster :D

Good job. I really loved this. It gives an insight to a world that no one else cares to think or learn about. I know people who've been through the same thing. Rejected no matter what they did, laughed at for no reason, and never seeming to catch up.... I really do love this :) you're an amazing writer; and the great thing about poetry is, even if you don't think anyone will like it or get it, someone always does. Keep writing :) I'll be waiting for more from your awesome brain.

@ Charisma.Mars
Why thank you, I actually thought this poem did not show my writing skills in poetry but after reading your comment, it gives me a bit more of an optimistic view on this poem, I try my best to give people a visual view of things, I want you and the world to understand what I am seeing and saying as best as possible and yes it is a bit of me in there also so once again, thank you :) More magic will be dropped soon, even got a new poem up already

Wow dude. You really let people in there. First, I want to say how I like that you had the whole rhyming flow going on and ten it transitioned into like a story. That was cool because its so visual and vivid that it gives you a whole scene with characters and all. Second, I love the emotion put into it, you can tell that it wasn't just words but something taken from you and thats important especially when you let others into your world. Well done, mang. Just got on this site and already dropping magic lol.