End Of Her World - Comments

  • ameida

    ameida (100)

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    This girl, her face only shows truth
    You can see in her eyes that she is strong
    But when she talks, do you see that gleam?
    The shimmer of tears, before she blinks them away?
    The way she shakes her head, a lame attempt to cleanse impure vision
    Sometimes, little movies play through her mind
    She watches, and her eyes become vacant, far away
    If you can, you'll catch flashes of sorrow
    She's never quite there, but somewhere else, listening to another story...that sounds a lot like me. This poem was wonderful and dark.
    October 21st, 2012 at 12:49am