The Lightless Lighthouse Near the Bay - Comments

  • punkspaceship

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    @ DamagedSoul
    Thank you!
    November 29th, 2012 at 01:32am
  • tumblingcactus

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    I really like the first 3 parts
    November 29th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • DarkLighter

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    Thank you! ! Please give me feedback :3
    November 28th, 2012 at 11:55pm
  • punkspaceship

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    @ DarkLighter
    Thanks! I really appreciate it :)
    Sure thing hon, I totally will!
    November 28th, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • DarkLighter

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    This is beautiful (: I like the whole" lying under an ocean" idea. The structure of the poem is very good also (the way its shaped). You have q lot of talent :3 I would love for you to check out my (sort of) poem scrapbook kind of thing. Its on my profile and its called Remember Me. Would you check it out ??:3
    November 28th, 2012 at 11:46pm