November 29th, 2012 at 01:32am
The Lightless Lighthouse Near the Bay - Comments
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I really like the first 3 partsNovember 29th, 2012 at 01:29am
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Thank you! ! Please give me feedback :3November 28th, 2012 at 11:55pm
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@ DarkLighter
Thanks! I really appreciate it :)
Sure thing hon, I totally will!November 28th, 2012 at 11:53pm -
This is beautiful (: I like the whole" lying under an ocean" idea. The structure of the poem is very good also (the way its shaped). You have q lot of talent :3 I would love for you to check out my (sort of) poem scrapbook kind of thing. Its on my profile and its called Remember Me. Would you check it out ??:3November 28th, 2012 at 11:46pm
Thank you!