December 7th, 2012 at 06:22pm
Emotions are the gas in the vehicle of poetry. The separation of the stanzas made the poem flow, it made me pause and think, to put it together like it is a puzzle. The curse in the beginning attested to your anger, it made me feel that you were truly angry (which is something many people forget- that we actually do curse when we are upset). You brought it out and did an amazing job of it.
I love it.
Ry
Thank you. I didn't think I would get any feedback on it actually. I'm glad you liked it.