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@ c0l0urfultears
Thanks a bunch

This is beautiful. It sounds as if the person speaking is very sad and broken, yet numb to it all. They're very matter-of-fact and seem to be even bored by their situation.
Despite the dry, emotionless tone, it's so full of emotion. It's amazing, you have such a brilliant way with words.

Ok I'll go over again. I just kinda threw it down. Thanks for the input I haven't been getting much.

I love the poem, maybe some breaks in the sentences to make it look more neat. And it would look great! kudos.