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notweirdbutunique (750)

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I'm here if you need anything, love.

January 30th, 2013 at 12:46am
carousels; (100)

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I have to agree with Sree. Don't rewrite it because the rawness of it conveys a lot of emotion.

January 29th, 2013 at 11:16pm
GoodGirl; (105)

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Don't rewrite this. The rawness is good. It's radiating emotion.

January 29th, 2013 at 10:49pm

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