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  • notweirdbutunique

    notweirdbutunique (750)

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    I'm here if you need anything, love. Arms
    January 30th, 2013 at 12:46am
  • carousels;

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    I have to agree with Sree. Don't rewrite it because the rawness of it conveys a lot of emotion.
    January 29th, 2013 at 11:16pm
  • GoodGirl;

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    Don't rewrite this. The rawness is good. It's radiating emotion.
    January 29th, 2013 at 10:49pm
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