The Result of Absence - Comments

  • blades

    blades (100)

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    I'm so happy to see you post something. you really do have an unmistakeable talent. I love this.
    March 28th, 2013 at 11:35pm
  • DrasticMeasures

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    Wow! This was amazing. I must add that they layout you chose added to the overall feeling. Gray is the color of absence and it really brought out the tone of your poem. Then your choice of words made it all the more so great...
    Just great job. Amazing word choice. Amazing layout.
    Ry
    March 28th, 2013 at 01:15pm