I rarely venture into the poems section because I never find anything like this. It’s simple and short yet very sad and powerful, whilst avoiding clichés (which I understand is a difficult task when writing about eating disorders). The whole language, form and structure work together well and makes it look so effortless. It’s lovely.
WOW! wowwwww. You are so talented! Your poem is original, voiced, quaint, and just down right beautiful. Your work is to perfection and I couldn't grasp how amazing your imagery is. I couldn't help but adore every stanza, this poem says a lot and I'm so glad I read it, it was truly an honor. You have a lot of talent and I absolutely love this poem. I actually adore it :D I would honestly die of happiness if you read my poem "HOPELESSLY PATIENT" and reviewed it, only if you want to of course :D Anyways, a job well done!!
thank you very much
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