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  • GoodGirl;

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    Jojo, this is gorgeous! <3 We haven't talked in forever!

    The heartbreak radiating off of it.. this poem is just too gorgeous.. Keep your head held high, Mibba's got your back.
    May 7th, 2013 at 12:14am
  • lucky13_93

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    I am so very, very in love with this. It was touching in the most serious, emotional way possible. There are so many good things I have to say about this, and none of them are really coming out. Well done <3
    May 6th, 2013 at 09:50pm
  • a mimosa pudica

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    You seriously took love poems to a new level and I loved it. You've used the phrases: I took and I taught repetitively and you've made it meaningful.

    Seriously, any girl would fall for this poem. I know I already have. Cute
    May 6th, 2013 at 03:22pm
  • Normanreedus

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    gorgeous meaningful poem. Very easily realteable for many young women out there who have poetic personalitys and find young men in this sort of way. Beautiful
    May 6th, 2013 at 07:27am
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