Yes, I enjoyed it. To be honest, I don't think there could be a poem like yours that could describe how much the girl wants to be part of the blue, dark sky.
Each line held a poetic feeling to it, which of course makes it a poem but you've given in such a depth that I couldn't really describe.
Each line held a poetic feeling to it, which of course makes it a poem but you've given in such a depth that I couldn't really describe.
A thumb's up on this one, love!