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  • AllexusAri

    AllexusAri (100)

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    Thanks! I appreciate the feedback :)
    September 19th, 2013 at 04:56pm
  • zwtd

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    Solid. I might work on lyrical construction if you're doing a rhyming poem, or direction. Where is 7th avenue going to lead you? But that's just me. Solid poem. Good job!
    September 19th, 2013 at 06:08am
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