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PoeticBeauty86 (100)

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Thanks oh the last line wasn't meant to rhyme I did that intentionally

October 7th, 2013 at 02:58am
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Very good! The rhymes are great, but I don't get the last one

October 7th, 2013 at 02:42am

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