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  • PoeticBeauty86

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    Thanks oh the last line wasn't meant to rhyme I did that intentionally
    October 7th, 2013 at 02:58am
  • Suffering

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    Very good! The rhymes are great, but I don't get the last one
    October 7th, 2013 at 02:42am
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