Hazelnut - Comments

I really like this. I love hazelnut. This poem is simple but there's a lot of emotion in it, it very sweet and whoever you were thinking about while writing this must be pretty special. The rhyming is well done and everything flows really well.

This is so lovely! There's really a feeling of warmth laced all throughout the poem, a feeling of quiet happiness and sweet tranquility. You've worded every line very well, and the description is very nice. "Soft hazelnut laced lips," "Our fingers perfectly intertwined," "naturally sweet like the taste of my lips," "pearly skin," and "puffs of bliss" all create really nice imagery. This poem evokes very sweet, warm emotions. I love it. :)

I like your style. I'll be checking out more