this is good. id say 7/10 because some parts sound a little forced. like "forever I will be hating/ them, because they lied" it doesnt fit.
but it is good! i liked it.
sorry. fine!
ummm its great 10/10
well naturally i'm gonna say that.
since i wrote some of it!
but ya its great.
duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
and i agree with nailthenextfool.
it needs rhyming help.
take it to a doctor or something
cuz your poem is sick!
My Unspoken Pain
idk. it could be lame.
but i think its freakin awesome!