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  • Cigarette Daydreamer

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    @ beautiful creature

    @ Ariveria
    thank you so much(: that means a lot to me.
    November 9th, 2013 at 02:20am
  • beautiful creature

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    <3 . Beautiful I lo ed the ending before it turns red oh so powerful.
    November 8th, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • Ariveria

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    Can I first say that I adore this layout? And the poem itself is beautiful. Every stanza sounds so sweet, but carries with it the darker hints of what's coming. The contrast of that sweetness and darkness is amazing. Subtly sad up to last stanza, when it really makes an impact. Every line is well-worded and the pictures it paints in my mind are so bittersweet. I love it. :)
    November 8th, 2013 at 11:10pm
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