November 29th, 2013 at 02:47pm
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November 29th, 2013 at 05:23am
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@ Airi.
You're right, in a sense . Thank you for the kind words. The emotions in the poem were real- almost as intense as how they felt, and as close as I can get to describing themNovember 29th, 2013 at 05:23am -
@ Airi.
You're right, in a sense . Thank you for the kind words. The emotions in the poem were real- almost as intense as how they felt, and as close as I can get to describing themNovember 29th, 2013 at 05:22am -
@ Airi.
You're right, in a sense . Thank you for the kind words. The emotions in the poem were real- almost as intense as how they felt, and as close as I can get to describing themNovember 29th, 2013 at 05:22am -
Hey there! I'm here as a judge for the Magazine's Poetic Connections contest.
Your poem was really very hard hitting. If I understood it right, the person the narrator is talking to has passed away, right? I think that makes your poem very hard hitting, especially when it's being read right around the holidays which can be one of the more difficult times to deal with death.
Even if I got that wrong (I hope not though lol), I think the poem would be very hard hitting regardless. You had a lot of emotion in the poem. The imagery and words you used were frankly very excellently chosen and placed. The poem was very well written and very powerful.
Overall, I think you did very good on the poem. It was certainly a nice read. Nice job on it~November 29th, 2013 at 04:06am
This poem was really emotional, I can feel it from your part, and the narrator's part. If I am not mistaken, I believe the narrator is speaking of someone he/she had lost in some way. Which really hits home and is extremely powerful. I think you described the loss the best way possible and in a beautiful way too. I love the imagery that I got when I read it. Like how you used things like petals and waves to describe things. That really makes it beautiful to me.
Anyway, I believe you did great for what the contest asked for. However the narrator lost her love, you spoke about the narrator and his/her feelings. Not only that I thought the poem was set up and executed quite well.