So You Wouldn't Break - Comments

AngelicWasteland; (100)

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This is deep... Absolutely amazing, I love rhyming poems aswell, and this just spilled with emotion. :)

December 20th, 2013 at 12:47am

Dom. (170)

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Part 5!

I swear, your writing is just the deepest. I love the rhyme scheme of the poem and how it emphasized the emotion. The ending left on a strong note too. Great job!

December 15th, 2013 at 05:41am

DarkHeartedAngel (100)

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I agree that this is absolutely mesmerizing! I want to read it again and again!

December 4th, 2013 at 01:28am

DarkHeartedAngel (100)

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I agree that this is very mesmerizing. I want to keep reading it over and over again.

December 4th, 2013 at 01:24am

TheShiningSoul (150)

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Wow. Just... mesmerizing! You're such an emotive, deep writer. I just love it :D :D :D

December 3rd, 2013 at 10:13pm