So You Wouldn't Break - Comments

This is deep... Absolutely amazing, I love rhyming poems aswell, and this just spilled with emotion. :)

Part 5!

I swear, your writing is just the deepest. I love the rhyme scheme of the poem and how it emphasized the emotion. The ending left on a strong note too. Great job!

I agree that this is absolutely mesmerizing! I want to read it again and again!

I agree that this is very mesmerizing. I want to keep reading it over and over again.

Wow. Just... mesmerizing! You're such an emotive, deep writer. I just love it :D :D :D