Fatherless - Comments

I don't know why it's taking me so long to get to all poems, I'm so sorry! :(

But this... it's just so so so amazing! It's so beautiful, you can feel the emotions right in the chest. Wonderful <3 Really love this. I'm glad I read it. :D

@ Lex Luthor
Hugs are more than welcome and thank you :)

So I found this because someone recommended it, and the title caught my eye. I just... I want to give you more than just some positive appraisal.

This is so full of pain and longing, and it breaks my heart. He is surely missing out on having such a wonderful and amazing daughter.

I'm sending you a hug, and if you aren't okay with receiving strange hugs, than I'm sending you a smile.

@ Unnatural Angel
It's okay :) and I know what you mean by that. Writing is so much more understandable if the writer actually gets what they're writing about and yeah, no problem! I love reading great pieces xxx

@ TheShiningSoul
Thanks :) I find that writing about personal stuff makes for a better story/poem, and I feel much better thanks for reading :)

This is excellently worded and also really emotive too :'( I really feel for you, which is what makes an exceptional poem, as it strikes emotions from readers. But I hope you feel better after getting it all off your chest :) that usually helps a lot. I really did like reading this though xxxx

@ undefined snowflake
Thanks :)

This was very hard for me to read, as it brought a lot of emotions up from my past I thought I had forgotten. It's a very good poem. You know your way with words. The best kind of writing is when it draws emotion from people, well done.