A Doorway Into Another World - Comments

Hello, my name is Brittany and I'm here to help judge the Mibba Magazine Contest.

Wow. That's the first word that I thought of when I was reading your poem. Your imagery is just so spectacularly, instead of it being a feeling of possibilities I was able to see them. I just adored how you were able to word it and paint a colorful picture inside my head which made me feel warm.

I really do love the last line, especially with how it's worded, "yet, again." It's as if saying we are always going on these adventures, always having new opportunities that are ours for the taking. This poem was a breath of fresh air, and I inhaled deeply. Wonderful job.

Best of luck to you! Keep those creative juices flowing.

Hello, my name is Brittany and I'm here to help judge the Mibba Magazine Contest.

Wow. That's the first word that I thought of when I was reading your poem. Your imagery is just so spectacularly, instead of it being a feeling of possibilities I was able to see them. I just adored how you were able to word it and paint a colorful picture inside my head which made me feel warm.

I really do love the last line, especially with how it's worded, "yet, again." It's as if saying we are always going on these adventures, always having new opportunities that are ours for the taking. This poem was a breath of fresh air, and I inhaled deeply. Wonderful job.

Best of luck to you! Keep those creative juices flowing.

*Mibba Magazine Contest*

The idea behind this poem is really wonderful and enlightening! You've used the contest's theme in such a way that it causes the reader's mind to explode with the images you describe so beautifully.I adore your word choice and your descriptions; together they work so well to produce a bright and hopeful outlook on a new beginning.

It's the first verse that took my breath away. It's the perfect way to grab the reader's attention, or maybe just me with the mention of those shiny jewels!

All in all, you've been really creative here and it's paid off! Well done!