Babysitting is Not Fun - Comments

@ Airi.
*Squeee* What an awesome comment! :3 I'm glad the poem made you laugh! Thanks for the comment!

Hey there! I'm here as a judge for Mibba Magazine's Poetry Month contest. I do apologize that this comment is coming so late but I assure you the entry was judged in full when we did the judging. Since there were so many, we did the judging before the commenting but I got a bit held up in real life and the comments got delayed. So I do apologize for not giving you your comment sooner.

This entry definitely stood out from the others, that's for sure~ I was really surprised when I read this poem and I mean that in a good way. It was different than any of the other entries I've read and it was something I wasn't expecting to be reading for this contest.

I can admit that your poem had me laughing~ It was a good change from the poems I usually read and I needed a laugh, both when I read this for the judging and when I'm re-reading it for the comment. It helped cheer me up both times so I'm glad that I got the chance to read it. :3

I also love the ending of your poem. Quite a clever ending there. :3 This was a very fun and light hearted read. You did really well on it.

@ Norman Reedus
Thank you for the lovely comment! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

First of all, I love how relaxed this poem is. It's so nice and it has a touch of comedy which I loved. The poem drew me in already at the first paragraph and it seemed really happy and just, i enjoy life moment at the first chapter.

I love the dialogue in the poem as well and how it's written, it's so descriptive and casual, which makes it really entertaining to read!

The last three paragraphs had me smiling because it was really fun, the last paragraph just summed the three up so well and made it really fun! Really awesome poem!

@ PoeticBeauty86
:D Oh thank you! :D

this is hilarious you are very descriptive, the vivid imagery just leaps out of every stanza, and really draws your readers in. great job!

@ OfMiceAndKayla
;D

The ending though.

@ Javin Pilotte
Thank you!

LMAO i love this. the writing is really lively and animated

@ TheShiningSoul
Thank you for the lovely comment! :D I'm glad it made you laugh! :3

I loved reading this :) I felt bad for laughing towards the end, but the way you write flows so well, it's hard not to get immersed into the poem... You have a great talent for writing! Keep it up.x.x.x