Suicide - Comments

  • Stashon

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    @ TheShiningSoul
    Aww, I really appreciate your comment! Thanks a lot! Very Happy
    April 15th, 2014 at 01:49pm
  • Stashon

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    @ HeartlessDemonz
    Thank you so much! Wink
    April 15th, 2014 at 01:48pm
  • HeartlessDemonz

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    For a poem not in your native language, I think you did a good job. I think you had a great word choice and good imagery. The flow of the poem was off at times, but it always came back together. Overall I think you did a good job with this.
    April 15th, 2014 at 12:58am
  • TheShiningSoul

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    This is absolutely fantastic to say that it is your first poem written in English! You did a great job with this and the words moved me so much :') Amazing.x.x.x
    April 14th, 2014 at 10:58pm