For a poem not in your native language, I think you did a good job. I think you had a great word choice and good imagery. The flow of the poem was off at times, but it always came back together. Overall I think you did a good job with this.
This is absolutely fantastic to say that it is your first poem written in English! You did a great job with this and the words moved me so much :') Amazing.x.x.x
Aww, I really appreciate your comment! Thanks a lot!