That was thrilling I was on the edge of my seat after every line. The way you used the harsh voice on the main character. It wasn't confusing It was crazy but in a good way I don't know how to explain, just inside me I felt passionately angry. It was good for me to read something like this
I was on the edge of my seat after every line.
The way you used the harsh voice on the main character. It wasn't confusing
It was crazy but in a good way
I don't know how to explain, just inside me I felt passionately angry.
It was good for me to read something like this