As We Get Older - Comments

I am overall pleased with this poem. I think you did a nice job with creating something that is meaningful poem. I think you did a nice job with the title because it captured the essence of the poem. I wished that you had played around with line breaks a little more. I think that you did produce a lovely poem though!

I am overall pleased with this poem. I think you did a nice job with creating something that is meaningful poem. I think you did a nice job with the title because it captured the essence of the poem. I wished that you had played around with line breaks a little more. I think that you did produce a lovely poem though!