Lost Cause - Comments

Like the title and as always the flow effortlessly perfect, you are an extremely talented writer, whenever you write something new I always read and I'm only surprised to see something written better that what you wrote previously. We all have the ability to love and when we love we hurt. I like you express you can no longer fight your losing everything. I been there done that a cheating mate only creates distrust, bitterness, pain. Through your poems is a good outlet for your pain. Forgive, move on, when you say in your poem you still feel bound the feelings I just described keeps you bound. You will find love again when you least expect! Oh I love your layout, beautiful..

Like the title and as always the flow effortlessly perfect, you are an extremely talented writer, whenever you write something new I always read and I'm only surprised to see something written better that what you wrote previously. We all have the ability to love and when we love we hurt. I like you express you can no longer fight your losing everything. I been there done that a cheating mate only creates distrust, bitterness, pain. Through your poems is a good outlet for your pain. Forgive, move on, when you say in your poem you still feel bound the feelings I just described keeps you bound. You will find love again when you least expect! Oh I love your layout, beautiful..

I like this poem. I think it's really nicely done. You are a wonderful writer there is no doubting that. I think you have a really strong sense of your abilities and I love that. I think you know yourself as a writer and I can tell because I've read a nice amount of your stuff. Your poem flowed perfectly and beautifully and I loved that. Flow in a poem is really important and you nailed that.

I wish that the theme/emotion was a little more represented. I thought it was nice that you used the word in the poem more than once, but I wonder if I would get faith if the times you used it weren't there. I think that this particular one was a challenge one, so I don't think you did it badly, I just wanted a little more.

I do love this poem. I think you wrote something really nicely, and really well put together. It's clear that a lot of thought went into this. It's clear that you wanted to produce a strong poem and you did that really well.

Some of the things I took away from this poem is a sense of finality, love, hurt, and acceptance. Whether that's what you intended to come across, I don't know. I liked your word choice. It really helped with the flow of the poem in my opinion. This was beautifully written. Really good job with this.